The majority of us write emails as one of the main forms to communicate but do we always get it right? The purpose for writing an email can vary greatly but it can generally be agreed they are more formal than a text message or a WhatsApp chat. Getting the level of formality right is difficult for many of us. Being too formal can be just as bad as being too informal. This article will look at phrases we can use to show the correct formality and phrases it’s best to avoid.
A good beginning
As you start your email, consider who the person is you are writing to. If are writing to someone for the first time then it is best to be quite formal. If you don’t know the name of the person, then an obvious start is Dear Sir/Madam, but if you know their name, use their title and family name; Dear Mr. Smith, Dear Dr. Goh.
You may have written to the person a few times before so look back at previous emails from them so see how they signed off. When the writer has ended with their first name, you can start your email with that, but if they have used their full name (Mr. Smith) you should reply accordingly.
The main body
Before directly mentioning the topic, ask how the recipient is. Just a simple ‘How are you?’ is fine and sets the tone for the rest of the email.
The purpose of more formal emails is often to supply information, ask for details, or reply to questions. When requesting information, try to keep your English modern and neutral. Phrases such as “Kindly furnish details (about…)’ are overly formal and lengthy, as well as quite dated. We would typically say ‘Please could you tell me……’.
Try to keep your message brief and avoid incorporating too many redundant phrases which will make the email longer than it needs to be. Expressions such as ‘for your information’ or ‘refer to the above mentioned’ are unnecessary and not typically used by native speakers.
If you are asking questions, be direct but polite. It is not necessary to say ‘Can I ask (when will you arrive)?’. Instead ‘When will you arrive?’ or ‘Please let me know when you will arrive’ are both suitably formal and more typically used. It is also important to remember you generally use ‘please’ rather than ‘kindly’ for most requests.
The end of the email is just as important as the beginning and the same level of formality needs to be kept. ‘Bye’ is not considered suitable as it is very informal, but ‘please revert soonest’ is overly formal. Aim for a more neutral phrase such as ‘Look forward to hearing from you’.
Your ending should also correspond with your greeting: Dear Sir ends with Yours faithfully, whereas if you know the name of the person the message ends with Yours sincerely.
Each email will differ slightly depending on content, recipient, and purpose but these are some ideas that can be applied to many situations.